Hi My Name is Coral-lee ,My school is called Ngatea Primary School My teacher are called Mrs Hull ,Mrs Taaffe,Mrs Harris
I really like your backgrounds because they really go with your story.
I really like you story line and the backgrounds go well with your story, well done:)
I love the idea of this story Coral-Lee and the way the you have used a blurb to summaride the story. We need to meet together to look at punctuation and make a few changes, to ensure it all makes sense. Illustrations look great.
I like your story Coral-lee! I like your background too! :)
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Cool background coza!I also like ur story!!!
Thanks
I really like your backgrounds because they really go with your story.
ReplyDeleteI really like you story line and the backgrounds go well with your story, well done:)
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of this story Coral-Lee and the way the you have used a blurb to summaride the story. We need to meet together to look at punctuation and make a few changes, to ensure it all makes sense. Illustrations look great.
ReplyDeleteI like your story Coral-lee! I like your background too! :)
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ReplyDeleteCool background coza!I also like ur story!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks
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