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The night falls as the darkness surrounds me .The icy chills shivers up my spine ,with goose  Bumps popping out of my arm .Snow starts to scatter all over me, covering me with white .A light starts to gleam upon me with lines of  trees sitting there staring at me .I start to shiver with the light shinning and being surrounded by darkness I didn’t know what to do .

I couldn’t go anywhere.there was know where to be seen . And there was know where to go ,I start to yell….  but suddenly it echo back to me .The freezing snow starts to travel up my body .I get worried and yell hards as i can .

Then …. I stop yelling .I hear footsteps in the darkness ,my face went red and my body got hot,Inside of me my anger starts to build up,but I  didn’t want to take it out on someone i didn’t see  . I finally calm down and the footsteps stop ,I try to find my torch in my pocket but it was too  late it was gone forever.

I looked and looked but nothing happen ,so i just gave up .I went back to the spot .I decided to follow down the frosty path to where the light was but it went on and on ,Then it stop. Finally there was a shelter  .Down the steep hill but I didn’t notice the darkness down the bottom.

I ran down the steep hill trying to get to the shelter,  then in a second one big  cloud of darkness starts to fall over me and I couldn’t  find the way through to the shelter , I get my torch and find my way to the shelter.I search around and around the deep path but couldn’t find it . I will never give up .

Do you think He Found the house?





The three little fox and the big bad bear

One day, down in the deep dark woods,  in a rusty small den, lived a fox family . One day a big fox  the mother said to her three children ,”why don’t you go and build your own den”. And live by yourself so off ran Fox 1,2 and 3 the first fox had an idea to build a den  out of leaves but when he tried to get the leaves all together it was really difficult for him ,so he had and idea to rest under a tall waving tree , when he was sitting under the tree a calm fresh breeze flies down from the sky straight towards fox 1 then bang goes straight through him . He walks out of the shade and  starts to build his den in a different mood. In his mind he was feeling cool and happy  so that how he got his new den finished .

He crawled under the door  with a big smile and rested. As he woke up he heard a big roar “what was that” he said in his mind, he peaked around the corner and there it was a massive brown bear roaring through the woods ,but..... the bear had stopped roaring, he smelt  meat so he sneaked  around the corner and seen green  leaves  shaped like a den sitting there as the wind tries to pick it up ,the eldest fox stood there quietly like a mouse ,the big bad bear walked  in  front of the door and said “little fox little fox let me come in or I will roar your house down” , fox 1  the eldest one was talking in his mid and was saying “I want to be brave but I am really scared” so he gave up talking and started to say “ not by my hair by my fluffy tail ”,so then the bear got furious and opened his  mouth so wide .

Fox 1 then galloped through the woods to fox 2 the middle one   and her house was made out of woods ,he banged the door opened and said “there was a big bad bear roaring through the woods, as I woke up hearing it then i sneaked around the corner and seen it ,the bear then  open his wide mouth and done a big ROAR ,fox 2 said why don’t you live with me Instead ,so fox 1 sat down feeling like it was his home then with no noise the bear stood there so quietly until he felt like he should go ,fox 2 then sighted the bear and shouted out loud there’s a bear ,the bear then ran to the den and said little fox little fox  little fox let me come in or I’ll roar you house down” as the bear comes closer and closer the 2 foxes got scared then fox 2 siad not by my hair on my  fluffy tail   ,the bear got angry and done a big ROAR and the woods flew up,  the foxes then scurried like a cheetah through the woods to fox 3 .

Fox 3  was awoken by his  two siblings, the foxes face was really scared there mouths were dropped and they had burning faces that made them tiered . Fox 3’s house was out of logs so that made them more protective  ,than fox 3 peaked through his window and seen glowing bug eyes staring right at him ,the bear then went closer and closer to the den ,the bear then said “little fox little fox let me come in or I will roar you house down” ,fox 3 then said not  by my hair on my  fluffy tail  ,the bear got annoyed and opened his big mouth and went “ROAR” but the den didn’t fall down ,he  tried it again but it didn’t dropped so he  scrambled up the den and tries to fit through the hole where the foxes go ,as the bear tries to fit through the hole the three little foxes get the pots and fire it up,so they can burn the bad bear ,as the bear puts his body through the hole .

Oh no the bear is stuck ,and the fire is getting ready ,it fly’s up and burns the bears body ,the bear flew up and landed on the ground and went flying down the path of the woods ,so now the three little foxes are safe and sound .Without the bad bear .

My family

My mum is like a cheetah

She’s always running around  the place for us and other people.

My brother is like a kangaroo

he  always wants to jump up and down  around the house making all different noises .

My  sisters are like waving tree’s

they always like to wave to people even if they don’t know who it is .

My dad is like a fish he’s

always in the water at all times or else he’s under the sprinkler  at  home .

I am like a teacher

I  am always in at morning tea and lunch time doing my learning so It can be finished and

due on the right day and right time .

Altogether we have partly different things and  private stuff in our lives

but we all do it for fun .

On Thursday the 11th of April 2013, A primary school in Matamata was set on  fire , all of the students got out safely.  

Sadly a teacher, near the kitchen, where it all had started had been trapped around the fire the teacher was trapped  for about 3 hours, with burning flames rising high.  The three hundred students all had to wait on the field, quietly, till the fire  trucks came .

The firemen dashed  across the grass to the flames on top of the classrooms, and quickly got out there hose with the water zooming fast  ,then the firemen ran in with their protective clothes and seen the teacher lying down with closed eyes ,The firemen picked up the teacher who died and walked outside .

They pushed him in  the ambulance and drove away ,when the fire had all fell the three hundred students all rushed to clean up there burnt school ,there were dark black bark all around ,when everything was cleaned up all of the students went home early .

The next day matamata primary school all fundraised for there new school ,with a big festival on .

Good luck with your new school .

My Hero

A group of crimped up curls just sitting and waiting on top of his  firm hard head ,two  sharp deep  eyes staring right at me with a big smile on  his face.  All his love is staring at me is what makes me happy ,his big bulky muscles sticking out of his big strong arms and legs .

One thing that makes me happy is, he is always there for me and my  three other sisters, he always makes me feel happy when i’m down ,and that he is my supporter when  i'm at sports .My dad is one loving person and is a funny uncle to all my cousin .

My dad is a caring person that loves to encourage me and my sisters,every time we lose a game for  sports he is always there to encourage us , and says “that  it is okay to lose ,you had a great game.” I love my dad  because he inspires me and that   he helps me for everything I do.